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Post by Brutis Meta on Jul 2, 2005 13:05:38 GMT -5
Ok this story is using forum rules. It's going to follow Remmah Eof (changes his name to Jerak in CA1). So that means he is gonna start out under the Imperial, turn traitor and go to the chaos, set up and destroy the 7th company of the Scythes of Night, then turn traitor against the chaos and steal the crystal. Besides that (yeah i know the story line is pretty much planned out) everything is up to you.
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Post by Brutis Meta on Jul 2, 2005 13:06:09 GMT -5
Between the Chaos home world and Terra lies many dangers. However one direct route exists, it requires only one stop, Cadia. It is the quickest way for a Chaos attack on Earth and thus the site of many battles between the two. The Imperial Guard on this planet are battle hardened veterns, often called up for duty. Though Guards in other parts of the galaxy are scoffed at by Marines, Cadian ones are given a little more respect.
It is here on Cadia that we find the Imperial Guard Comissar Remmah Eof. He is a popular soldier, well liked even among the Marines that come to the planet. He is extremely loyal to the emporer and a gifted military mind.
The Eof family is known for their valiantry and skill. His father had been an Imperial Guard officer and was a famous warrior. His two older brothers had both been drafted and chosen for the Marines and were highly successful and known by almost all marines that came to Cadia. He him self became the youngest Comissar on Cadia.
He had just gotten word that the Chaos were on their way to attack Cadia. So Remmah started the procedure that had become to mechanical to him.
Remmah time as he called it ment he first called the governor tell him the Chaos had been spotted. Then he contacted his lieutenants told them to get their men ready. Then he contacted the Marines inform them of the situation. Then he himself would walk to the war room to plan the defense of the planet. It had become so monotonous he began to yern for a change of pace.
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Post by It's never Lupus on Jul 10, 2005 15:05:53 GMT -5
As Remmah awaited to get a letter telling him the advance would be permited against the chaos he planned a new strategy he might use today. He would try using his new baneblades in a quick offensive to kill as many chaos as possible and then follow with the infantry.
While he was waiting a messenger came in with a letter for Commisar Remmah Eof. As he oppened the letter it read as such.
Dear Commisar,
I have written you to inform you that the Scythes of Night shall be relieving you of your duties and taking care of this operation personally. They shall be using your troops so you are no longer needed for the fight. You shall be moved to the Vagus Sector to help with the rescent orc uprising. These are your new orders.
Signed,
Grand Commisar Franklin Howden
As his mind raced to comprehend what had just happened a Scythes of Night squad commander walked in. "Sir I shall be escorting you to your transport to the Vagus Sector," was all the marine said before turning and waving the Commisar to follow.
As the Commisar got into the transport he could only feel anger towards the command for giving him such a lowly job. 'Ha' he thought 'a few hundred orcs and not a chaos to find why this pathetic job'. I should be leading a battle that requires my eperience.
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Post by Brutis Meta on Jul 13, 2005 12:42:30 GMT -5
As Remmah traveled in the transport he could not help but feel confused and angry. He had many times before served under the Space Marines so why this time did they ship him off like a hinderance. The thought wallowed in his mind the entire trip.
When he finally arrived at the base he moved in to what would be his headquarters. "Sir, welcome." Said a bright faces Leutinant. "My name is Milo and I am to help you with what ever you need."
"Okay, what are we up against and what do we have?" Remmah questioned Milo.
"We believe that the enemy is about 200 orks. Our men total about 50."
Remmah was appalled usually they should have a lot more Guards men "Why do we have so few men?" he asked
"Well sir, when the chaos started to move towards Cadia our regulars and most of our equipment was taken to be used to defend against the chaos. What we have for your mission is mostly new recruits. Sir, we do have word that the Orks are east of us preparing to attack the city of Filra, do you want to engage now?"
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Post by It's never Lupus on Jul 20, 2005 15:01:34 GMT -5
As he prepared the defences Remmah wondered why he a top commissar on Cadia was in the swamps defending a pathetic minning village with inadequate men. He began to wonder who had put him here and why this pathetic stinkhole.
This sluge of a city could be burned to the ground for all he cared these people had no right living as they had been. 'Well I'll atleast protect it as ordered' he thought.
As the orks came in his heavy weapons started to tear their troops appart in a hail of bullets. Wave after wave fell to the cannons and soon the orks came into range of their short ranged weapons and the guard opened fire with all guns. The orks then did something quite odd they began to zigzag up the field.
'Was this a new tactic of theirs?' he thought then he noticed they had just made a path for an ork dreadnaught.
"$hit all units take that out it will massacre us if we arent careful!!" he yelled over the com-system.
As his units blue the dreadnaught appart the remaining 15 or so orks came into close range and began to fight the imperial guard.
Remmah realized the time to act was now. So he ordered all remaining troops to shoot at the orks that were tied up with the remaining guard units. He did this knowing the Imperial Guard were no match for orks in close combat no matter how well trained.
Only half his troops fired killing 10 orks while the other 15 ran in to help the 5 remaining guardsmen and most of the units were butchered by the barbaric orks. only 3 guardsmen survived the close combat encounters.
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Post by Brutis Meta on Jul 26, 2005 11:46:03 GMT -5
Remmah was quite relieved when the dust cleared and all the orks lay there dead. The battle had actually come out pretty well. They had managed to kill all 200 some odd orks and an ork dreadnaught, while he only lost 29 of his men. Even though the orks had managed to get into close range, he was able to minimize causaulties by using the tactic that he did, he would have saved more if his men had just listened to him. "But man what an amazing victory, poorly trained troops, subpar equipment, 4 to 1 odds, plus they had a dreadnaught that I didn't even know about, and I only lost 29 men."
He got back to base and called for Milo. "Yes, sir?" stuttered the leutinant, obviously shaken by something.
"I want you to write up a report of the battle and send it to the HQ, tell them the battle was a stunning success. And by the way whats the matter."
"I just don't understand sir, you ordered your men to fire into their comrades. Thats something only a twisted and soulless commander would do."
"Don't you see those men would have died anyways the Guards would not have been able to beat an ork in close combat. If I hadn't made my men fire into them the orks would have just ripped through all my men at close combat."
The leutinant excused himself obviously still not fully trusting Remmah. 'Oh well Milo my not understand it but my superiors will relize that what I did was nessary to cut our loses.'
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Post by It's never Lupus on Aug 17, 2005 13:18:40 GMT -5
To Remmah Eof,
You are being revoked of your title as Commisar of the Imperial Guard. You are losing this title as of 00:00 this night. The reasons for this are your blatant disregard of lives. Every trooper under your comand shall be executed as of 01:00 tomorrow. You shall be executed at 02:00 tomorrow. Those under your comand that refused to fire on their fellow brethren of the Imperium of man shall be given no punishments. The Scythes of Night will be taking you into custody as of 00:00 this night you are also ordered to stay put and are under strict orders to protect your area until proper soldiers can replace you.
Signed
Grand Commisar Franklin Howden
As Remmah read the letter he could only wonder in dispair as he realized he was about to die. 'What all over a few dead troopers' he thought 'they had to die or we would have lost everything'.
As he came under the full realization of what was happening he began to plot a way to survive this horrible death trap he had been put into. And one overpowering thought entered his mind 'Kill the Space Marines!!!'. He decided 'Yes that would work I could lure them to the chaos I could join the chaos. They would agree with me they haven't killed me yet I could be a great assett to them.
As he planned this he called upon the entire company of his to join him and asked for the entire 7th company of Scythes of Night to fight a choas force entering from the west.
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Post by Brutis Meta on Feb 6, 2006 22:43:23 GMT -5
Many of his men refused to abbandon their "great leader", Remmah simply had them all executed. No need to worry about protocol anymore. He had the rest swear alligence to him, they did from fear of being killed by Remmah or the Scythes. 'They are the smart ones,' Remmah mused, 'they know that the only ones looking out for them is themselves'.
"The Emporer doesn't care about you, he never has" Remmah boldly proclaimed, "He has left us unprotected and facing the Chaos onslaught after onslaught. And do we ever get any respect. NO. But the Space Marines, that come and coattail OUR victory are given parades. What thanks do we get? A death sentence that's what. What kind of parade are we given? A parade of blood. We fight and we defeat and have never needed the Space Marines, but the Emporer would never want this evidence to get out or else he would be seen as powerless. Well, let it be known as of today he will be powerless, we will defeat the Space Marines one by one, and we will do it with our new allies the Chaos."
'Now I just have to figure out how to contact the Chaos, that is going to be a challenge,' Suddenly he had an idea. "Milo, get in here" The luitenant had almost been shot when he refused to leave the Empire, but Remmah figured he might be of some use. And so he will be. "Milo, I want you to take this note straight to HQ. This is my resignation. If you do this you may live." Milo quickly grabbed the note jumped in a transport and headed out.
"Now to inform the chaos," Remmah grabbed the transmitter and made sure to turn off all security encripstions "Mayday, mayday" screamed Remmah, "we've taken heavy causualties, and are transporting all 1st class personel to HQ, be on the look out for transporter. On board we have field reports on movements of chaos, this intelligence is very crucial, protect at all cost."
'There that should get the Chaos' attention, and HQ couldn't give a d**n about any messages we're sending out."
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Post by Brutis Meta on Mar 20, 2006 21:58:30 GMT -5
Remmah Eof struck out with his band of men in search of their new overlords and saviors the Chaos. He would simply find them and submit himself and everyone else to them and they could help take down the Imperium that so coldly turned its back on them.
Now the only question was how to find the Chaos.
'No worries, the Chaos are probably out looking for us,' Remmah reasoned, 'Can't be long now.'
A single shot rang out and one of the men standing next to Remmah fell over dead shot through the neck. The men scrambled unsure of from where or even from who the shot had come. They now relized that they were enemies of the Gaurd, the Space Marines, and still the Chaos as they had yet to actually submit to them. He ordered his men to do the only thing they could do since a fight was pointless and there was no way to win against any of their foes, he ordered a full retreat to the cover of the nearby ruins of a city.
His men hightailed it to the protections of the building hoping to escape the rain of bullets that was now coming down like flies. Men were falling as they ran, some dead some simply wounded crawling to make it off the streets. They were able to duck into three seperate buildings and escape their fire.
"Now the only way to get us is to expose themselves and come in after us." Remmah said triumphantly to his band of renegades. As he watch he saw with both relief and horror as Chaos marine began making their way towards the buildings.
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Post by It's never Lupus on Mar 22, 2006 17:48:32 GMT -5
As the chaos neared the building a force unimaginably strong ripped out the rear wall and a single man dressed in black took a step forward out of the dust. Remmah turned and instantly cried out in fear. The mans face, which could hardly be called human and it would be imposible to tell without the skin around its left eye, was scaley black which seemed to crawl around as he looked up. The man mumbled something and 10 demonic beings ripped their way into the material realm and began to mindlessly slaughter Remmahs men.
"Look up coward for you have yet to taste true fear!" beckoned the Demonic Priest in an inhuman voice that reeked of hate and malice. The priest grabbed Remmah's neck and lifted him with a single hand up into the air. The eyes of the priest bore down into the sould of Remmah and seemed to tear the insides of him appart. All Remmah could think of was hate, suffering, carnage, death, destruction, and most of all chaos. The priests eyes were full of hate and malice, and as he dropped Remmah to the ground Remmah no longer cared of his men nor the emperor nor vengeance all he could think of was the stench of chaos the demonic prince had filled his soul with.
As Remmah lifted himself from the ground he turned to see the Chaos marines fire shots int the stomachs arms and legs of all the men he had commanded. Not enough to kill them, just enough to make them suffer for hours. They made sure that even if the men were to be rescued nothing any apothecary would do could save them in time.
The Demonic Prince looked at Remmah and spoke in a voice as vile as the face that sent the words out. "Your men shall die, you have earned the right to join us and destroy the false emperor.
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Post by Brutis Meta on May 28, 2006 19:23:17 GMT -5
Remmah followed the dark prince, silent and obediant, out of both awe and fear. But one question continued to nag him, finally he broke the silence with a very horse whisper, "What do you want me for?"
The demonic priest did not even look at him, but said flatley, "That you do not need to know right now." Remmah confused continued to question him, "But won't the Space Marines be after me."
"No." The prince replied coldly. "How do you know?" Remmah continued.
"We killed the Gaurdsmen who were responsible for your arrest. They were too pig headed to request help from higher authorities. As far as the false Marines are conserned you died in the attack."
"So how can I, a dead soldier, possibly help you?"
The prince now turned and with a look that froze Remmah in his place and could have shut Remmah up forever and said surprisingly calmly, "I have already answered that question. You are done for now. You are not to speak as we walk any longer."
The trek back to the ship finished in complete silence.
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